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Before undertaking to criticize this work, which generally was well-presented, I must announce that it took time to upload. That appears to be a frequent malaise.
The general presentation befits a brief academic or informative style, and I have rarely criticized such works, although I have collected a few. There are questions which seem unanswered, such as the over all feeling of mystery about the setting, and they are evident as well as add to the suspense of the events discussed.I admit that Valentine's day 1990 is out of my range, as I left my country in 1980. Generally, it was a good writing and shows your understanding of the topic.
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Malintra-Shadowmoon Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for your critique.
I have to admit that beside poems I like to write academic essays and/or paranormal reports as well as philosophical studies.
Usually people avoid criticising such works, so I am really fond of seeing someone doing it.
Mostly, I try to write my essays in this form that someone new to the topic without any idea would be able to comprehend it. I try to figure out how I have to proceed to capture even someone skeptic. It is not always easy.
Thanks again :)
Michel-le-fou Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Professional Writer
You shine at this effort. Go ahead!
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