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[I apologize at first, because I had started but a sudden break in my connections interrupted me.]
Let me start with "scope of talent becomes the artist." Breach all subjects, use all styles and all means available. Until today, I never cease to enjoy your work. Here, you prove me again by using a Dickisian slanted rhyme couplet to open your poem. Then the remaining couplets are well-formed. So much for stylistics.Tone and mood are well-shown. The choice of words especially in some lines is clever The simile to the single drawn arrow was sharp, no puns intended. Another well-planned and well-penned work!
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12 out of 17 deviants thought this was fair.


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