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What hit me [no puns intended] immediately was that you used lower case and the general attitude and atmosphere of the selection. The atmosphere was of course highlighted by the use of various fonts and italics throughout the poem, and by the speech used. It was very blunt, I suppose to resemble a 'hit and run" autoist. Very effective to say the least. You may consider submitting to emotional or suspense poetry too. I shall refrain from negatives, since they do not fit in this case and are not my usual approach. To belittle a poet for not using caps is trivial to me. Carry on!
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autumnlit Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012
Thank you so very much! :iconexcitedlaplz:
Oh yes, I wasn't sure what category to put it in. I will definitely weigh those two options out soon. I'm just not sure what would be best.
Thank you so much for taking the time to critique! :tighthug:
Michel-le-fou Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Professional Writer
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