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I have not been up to this until lately. However, in accord with the above, I must add my share that the choice of words and the line formations, and the story-telling capacity of this narrative are very standard. I have not written a narrative poem for some time. This serves as a good example for resuming the art.
Furthermore, the use of italics or bold type, as practiced generally in writing as emphasis, was fitting. The content is of course always the right of the author, and I will say little more than that. I have my own choices. Altogether a good read.
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OfOneSoul Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for such a wonderful critique, my dear! :tighthug: I truly appreciate it. :smooch:

:heart: *OfOneSoul
Michel-le-fou Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Professional Writer
Glad for ya. Keep writing.
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