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Rain Poem #33
For Puabi

The rain fell in a torrent tonight
We lay in bed and listened
The voice of the rain was soft and low
It nearly lulled us to sleep
We turned to gaze at each other
She smiled and whispered to me
     "Beloved!"
I reached over to embrace her
Safe and sound she was in my arms♥
The rain may fall for one hour
It may fall all night long
It may not stop until morning
We neither know nor care
There is always one another
~~~Let the rain pour down~~~♥
More wet romance with Puabi. But I will write separately from the collections.
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NahaniDawg Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
So romantic... :) 
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Michel-le-fou Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013  Professional Writer
Puabi is always that way. Thanks for reading.
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NahaniDawg Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem! Thanks for writing. :) 
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TrinitySage Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
So sweet and romantic!
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Michel-le-fou Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Professional Writer
She deserves nothing less.

"Aw, beloved!"
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TrinitySage Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I just featured 33 and 34 in my latest journal entry -  fav.me/d6nr8cb
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Shirley-Agnew-Art Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013
This is just beautiful, so romantic! :-)
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:iconmichel-le-fou:
Michel-le-fou Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013  Professional Writer
My sincere thank you for accepting it too.
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Shirley-Agnew-Art Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013
You are more than welcome, I loved it, it is so sweet! :love:
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Michel-le-fou Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Professional Writer
More of that is coming.
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