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Love Haiku

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Michel-le-fou
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Literature Text

Love Haiku
Dictated by Puabi

Two streams merge on pillow
Joyful tears run along our cheeks
Two souls unite as one
Puabi's first haiku. Enjoy!

Inspired by poetess delice1941.
© 2014 - 2024 Michel-le-fou
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Dreamworld88
I like it a lot, but it has too many syllables for a traditional haiku.